It was a VERY good impression of a shopping telly presenter Benny.
But TBH, you really do need to develop your own style. The ones us viewers like watching (for better or worse) aren't afraid to show something of themselves when they appear onscreen, and don't come across like they're acting.
Look at the likes of Loen Love from IW, Debbie Flint, Debbie Greenwood, Alison Keenan and Anthony Heywood from QVC, and Peter Sherlock from Bid. If you seem like a "real person", people are going to be more likely to trust you and buy what you're trying to sell.
If that's the career for you, then I'd practise on developing a natural persona that isn't too far removed from your own.
And I agree with the above: while you may enjoy Bid, FGS don't work for them!
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